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rash00d1 said:
Ok this is ma very first story enjoy


My life as a miner


Started at night when creepers were running and playing endermens were playing cards (uno) meanwhile i made a crafting table. And hunted zombies appear while i killed them with ma fist


Moving on it morning creepers turned back into humans. I made alot of wooden weapons pixaxe sword shovel axe and hoes someone knocked the door
It waz zov told me about what enemys drops when they die. I asked him if he can come? He said if u make me a cake and meat on our way if we are hungry
Me and zov started the hunt when we saw creepers amd spiders i used my wooden sword while zov used his stone sword. We start killing untill there is no one is alive after we got string and gunpowder. And returned to our house


The end



Me in beta coming soon
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oh dear god... were-creepers
 
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rash00d1 said:
Another one 4 ur luck



The life of the miner 3


Meanwhile at ???? Secret liar



???:muhAhahahahaha
Creeper:ummm....israqhel
Israqhel: WHAT DO U WANT!!
Creeper: there are 7 of them and we are 3
Israqhel: use the army of all mobs
But first i'll get the 2 were creepers now
Israqhel teleported to zov and rash and capture them



Back at the lair
Zov: aaaaw i feel green and weird
Rash: that because we are creepers
Zov: but how did we reach here
Rash: wait....do u remember when lewis and simon defeated israqhel
Zov: yea
Rash: that means that israqhel turned us into colored creeper in this world
Zov: ahhhh i wanna be a human now
Rash: too late


Meanwhile with lewis and simon

Lewis: simon
Simon: yea
Lewis: THE 2 WERE CREEPER HAV BEEN CAPTURED BY ISRAQHEL!!!
Simon: isn't israqhel been killed?
Lewis: wait

Lewis remember last 2 month

Simon: give up israqhel!!
Israqhel: NEVER!!!
Israqhel used the dark sword but lewis pull it and sliced israqhel into 2 halfs
Israqhel's last word nooooooooo
He died

Back out from his mind

Lewis: yea he became another copy by the heal of doom or whatever they name it
Simon: we have to use all of our mods with the other

Meanwhile at the visitor palace

Kat: it seem to have someone missing
Casham: yea
Godli: wait where is zov and rash?
Kat: i dunno
Casham: i heard a strange sound at night
Kat i saw a creeper with white skin and red eyes
Godli: IT WAS ISRAQHEL!!
Casham: wow godli u don't need to shout loud
Kat: well i know just the place israqhel lives

Back at the lair

Zov: no way to kill my friend
Rash: zov don't worry everything will be...
Israqhel used a mute sword
Rash:......alright..... Fell down knocked out
Israqhel: no rash not everything
Zov: RASH NOOOOOOO!!!!
Zov used the diamond fist
Israqhel: its useless
Zov: !!!
Israqhel knocked out zov and send them to.....THE HIDDEN MOB PRISON!!!


To be continue...
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rash00d1 said:
This story is 100% better




The life of the miner 2

Chapter 1: peaceful?



At the airport


Rash: ummm what was that place name?
Zov: the name is the place where Lewis and Simon live
Rash: hey look who here

Katphish appeared

Kat: hi rash and zov
Zov: hi
Rash: hi >.>
Kat: soo where ur going
Zov:lewis and simon place
Kat: o
Rash: liked that place its epic i saw it in youtube
Zov:hey isn't that casham and godli?
Casham:hi rash,zov and kat
All 3: hi
Godli: soo ur going to that place where lewis and simon live?
Zov: yea
Casham: its 7:00 were late

Zov,casham,rash,kat and godli left to that place where lewis and simon live

Rash: finally were here
Kat: yeA
Zov: omg
Casham: whats the problem
Zov: its...
Rash: LEWIS AND SIMON!!!
Kat: they Are talking about something
Rash used the far ears to hear
Lewis: who are these guys simon they look like visitors
Simon: all i know is this were creeper rash from youtube
Lewis:well let go talk to them

Simon and Lewis talk to the 5 visitors

Lewis: welcome to yogscast
Simon: we are glad to see
U here
Rash: hi lewis and simon we are from team9000
CAsham: yea im an admin even godli is
Godli: yea
Kat: so can we take a tour
Lewis: yea but its like 3 hours

3 hours later

Lewis: so were having dinner 4 now
Simon: today's speical: steak,chips and chicken
Rash: yum thats the largest menu
I'll take....steak and a slice of cake
Zov: i'll take same as rash but with a full slice of cake
Kat: yea i'll take a mushroom stew with a 10 pieces of cookies
Casham: i'll have same but less cookies
Godli: sooo i'll have 20 melons with a mushroom stew and steak
Simon: soo that will be 5 dollars

Rash payed and everyone ate and everyone goes to bed

To be continue...
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Great stories but try to use more descriptive language, it will make the story more intriguing to the reader.
 
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